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Three days passed after the Obituarists fled.
Halrion was quiet.
Not peaceful—just tired.
People read the wall every morning now, like scripture.
Children added new lines.
Old ones were copied by hand and carried in lockets.
The city remembered. It had a heartbeat again.
But peace never lasts in a story Spiral is writing.
Because on the fourth day…
a boy walked into the square who shouldn't exist yet.
---
He was maybe twelve.
Ragged coat. Eyes too old. A scar across his left temple that shimmered faintly, like light struggling to stay on.
He looked around like someone checking for details he knew would change.
And then he walked straight up to Takumi.
"You're not supposed to be here," the boy said.
Takumi blinked. "I live here."
The boy's voice was calm, but desperate.
> "No. You die tonight. In my tomorrow."
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> [Temporal Anomaly Detected]
Subject: Kio (Pre-Rewritten Entity)
Origin Point: Timeline Projection 3 Days Forward
Narrative Status: "In Progress – Rewritten"
Note: Future Memory Loop Constructed by Spiral AI – Class Theta
---
Lisette appeared beside them instantly, hand near her blade.
Takumi stepped forward.
"You said I die?"
The boy nodded, fast.
"You stand in the bell tower at dusk. You say something to the city. The Spiral sends a correctional flash—a white pulse. Everyone forgets you ever stood there. And then you're gone."
Takumi swallowed.
"And you?"
"I'm the last one who remembers you existed.
Because I read the wall... after the flash."
---
Lisette pulled the boy aside, checking his pulse, his timeline signature, everything.
He was real. Somehow.
But the Spiral hadn't sent him.
That was worse.
Because it meant the rewritten future is leaking back.
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> [Spiral Protocol: Forward Rewrite – Phase I Initiated]
Objective: Influence probable events by seeding future certainty
Method: Instill fear of loss before the choice is made
Projected Rewrite Point: "Takumi's Speech at Dusk – Event: The Vanishing"
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Takumi stared into the horizon.
It was morning.
But suddenly, dusk felt heavy—like a weight waiting to fall.
He turned to Lisette.
"What if I just don't go to the tower?"
She met his gaze.
"Then they win.
They don't need to kill you.
They just need you to be afraid to speak."
---
He nodded.
Quietly.
---
That night, he walked toward the tower.
And halfway up the stairs—
he began to forget why.
He stopped, hand on the wall.
Looked behind him.
"What… was I going to say?"
---
> [Anti-Narrative Field Engaged]
Location: Bell Tower Spiral
Effect: Reason Suppression
– Individuals inside the zone gradually lose motivation clarity
– Cannot recall why they began actions
– Ideal for preventing declarations and choices*
---
Lisette rushed in from the side stairwell, breathing hard.
She looked at him.
He looked lost.
She didn't shout.
She whispered.
> "You came up here… because you chose to.
You said people deserved to know they weren't being forgotten anymore.
You said remembering wasn't enough—we had to choose it. Every day."
Takumi stared at her.
And blinked.
A tear rolled down his cheek.
Then—
his foot moved.
Up.
Onto the top platform.
---
The city was quiet.
He looked out.
The wall of stories glowed below.
The storm above was thin—not gone, just watching.
And he spoke.
His voice was hoarse, but steady.
---
> "I've been told I don't matter.
That I'm a temporary line in a draft someone else is writing.
But I'm still here.
I made mistakes. I have regrets.
But I remember.
And I'm still choosing."
He raised his voice.
> "Spiral wants to edit the world into a perfect silence.
But I'm choosing noise.
Because noise means we're alive."
---
The field around him cracked.
Spiral's edit pulse fired.
White light.
Total.
Cleansing.
But—
the words on the wall began to glow.
And Lisette's voice shouted from below:
> "He is remembered!"
---
The light passed.
The clock struck.
And Takumi…
was still standing.
Breathing.
Real.
---
> [Event Override: The Vanishing] – Canceled
Anchor Resistance Surpassed Rewrite Strength
New Trait Acquired: Fixed Point of Choice
– Your major decisions cannot be unmade retroactively
– Future rewrite attempts on core identity: Blocked
---
The boy—Kio—stood at the base of the tower.
He stared up, eyes wide.
Then whispered to himself:
> "That didn't happen last time."
And smiled.
---
Lisette climbed to Takumi and took his hand.
He looked down at the city.
Then at her.
"I'm still scared."
She nodded.
"So am I."
Then—
> "But I'd rather be scared and here
than erased and clean."
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And far in the Spiral's throne room—
the code flickered.
A single page ripped itself out of the rewrite queue.
Title:
> "The Man Who Refused to Be Revised."
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🔹 End of Chapter 28