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Chapter 10 - Chapter 10: The Judgment

Leo walked out of the hotel into the bright, indifferent Los Angeles morning. The comfortable warmth of the room with Salma was already a receding memory, replaced by the cold, hard focus of the day ahead. He knew what their night together was—an epilogue to an intense, shared experience, not the prologue to a romance. His career was a fragile, brilliant halo of "potential." As long as it shone, he would be a magnet. If it shattered, he knew the very people drawn to its light would be the first to disappear. That was the cold calculus of Hollywood.

He pushed the thought aside as he arrived at the imposing New Line Cinema building. Today, there was only the film.

Rick met him in the lobby and led him down to the post-production wing. "The editing suite is all yours," Rick said. "And they've assigned you one of their best cutters, a guy named Tyne."

The editing room was a dark, cool cave, smelling of celluloid and ozone. It was dominated by a massive, flatbed film editor that looked like the control panel for a spaceship. Standing beside it was Tyne, a tall, skeletal man with hollow cheeks and the intense, unblinking stare of someone who spends more time with images than with people.

After a brief, monosyllabic introduction, Leo realized conversation was not Tyne's strong suit. He was a technician, a purist. And Leo, in his mind, was already light-years ahead.

"Let's start with reel one," Leo said, and their work began.

The editing room became a laboratory where Leo could dissect moments and stitch them back together into something new and terrifying . He didn't just follow the script; he followed the rhythm he felt in his gut, a rhythm perfected by his memory of what worked and what didn't in the original 2004 version.

"No, cut there," Leo would say, pointing at a frame. "Right on the scream. Then a hard cut to the exterior shot. I want to give the audience whiplash."

Tyne would raise a skeptical eyebrow, his entire posture screaming that it violated some sacred rule of pacing. But he would execute the cut. Then, they would watch it back. The jarring transition was brutally effective. Tyne would watch it again, and a slow, grudging nod of respect would be his only comment.

For eight days, the editing suite was Leo's entire world. He slept on a small cot in the corner, subsisting on coffee and sandwiches delivered by New Line, the outside world ceasing to exist. He wasn't just assembling a movie; he was sculpting with time itself, chipping away everything that wasn't pure, uncut dread . Finally, exhausted and unshaven, he held up a finished film reel. His first feature film was complete.

The next day, showered, shaven, and dressed in his best clothes, Leo walked back into New Line Cinema. This time, he was escorted to the executive floor. Rick was already there, pacing nervously. They were greeted by Robert Shaye, the president and founder of New Line. Shaye was a powerhouse, his friendly smile doing little to mask the sharp, calculating intelligence in his eyes.

"Leo! A pleasure," Shaye said, shaking his hand warmly. "Dean and Rick have been singing your praises. They say you're the real deal. When I heard the director's cut was finished, I cleared my schedule."

Shaye led them into a private, plush screening room. Several other people were already seated—the internal focus group, the tastemakers whose opinions would determine the fate of the film's marketing budget.

"These are my secret weapons," Shaye explained to Leo in a low voice. "They tell me if I have a hit or a dud. No pressure."

Leo just nodded, handing the film canisters to the projectionist. He took a seat in the back, next to Rick. He wasn't going to watch the movie. He was going to watch them.

The lights dimmed to black. The speakers crackled to life.

The film began. Adam's terrified gasp in the bathtub. The reveal of the grimy, tiled room. The other man, chained. The corpse in the center of the floor. Leo watched the viewers' faces, illuminated by the flickering screen. He saw their casual curiosity morph into focused intrigue. They leaned forward.

As the film unspooled its series of brutal tests and moral quandaries, the audience became a single organism, breathing and flinching in unison with the horrors on screen . There were audible gasps during the infamous "saw your own foot off" sequence. But the true impact came at the end.

The reveal. The "corpse" on the floor slowly, impossibly, rising to its feet. Jigsaw. The final, damning monologue. The iconic words, "Game over." The screen cutting to black, leaving only the sound of Adam's final, hopeless scream.

The credits rolled in absolute silence. The final reveal had landed in the room with the force of a physical blow .

Then, as the lights came up, the room erupted.

"Oh, my God," one of the viewers, a woman in her forties, breathed out. "That ending… my heart is still pounding."

"The villain… Jigsaw… is he a god?" another exclaimed. "He's punishing people on behalf of a higher power! It's incredible. I've never seen a character like that, one you're terrified of but also, on some level, you understand."

"The camerawork is so confident, no wasted shots," a third added. "And the actor playing Jigsaw… where in God's name did you find him, Leo? That calm smile combined with those eyes… chilling. Utterly chilling."

They all turned to Leo, their faces a mixture of awe and professional excitement. Robert Shaye looked from his team to Leo, his friendly smile now replaced by the focused, predatory grin of a man who knows he's just found a gold mine.

"Well, kid," Shaye said, his voice full of energy. "It seems my team agrees. We have a classic on our hands.

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