There, the breach yawned. A gash in the village's final shield. The magic around it was dim, flickering with a sickly light. It pulsed weakly, casting strange shadows across the forest floor.
And those shadows moved.
At least six Xylens roamed near the ruptur anky, malformed things with jagged limbs and skin like torn bark, their heads twitching as they lumbered in disjointed paths through the rain. They made no pattern, showed no purpose. They simply wandered, drawn by the unspoken call of broken magic.
Rane crouched low beside a fallen log, eyes narrowed as he studied the field ahead. The others huddled behind him, silent, waiting.
Drail murmured. "What the plan Sir Rane"
Rane didn't answer immediately. His eyes were fixed on the tear in the Barrier its edges rimmed with old runes, now darkened and twitching like a failing heart. He scanned the clearing slowly, noting every twitch and flicker.
Then he spoke, voice calm. "We can't fight through them all. We'd be dead before reaching the breach."
"So what then?" Drail asked. "Turn back?"
"No," Rane said, low but firm. "We will split up. One will Draw them away and Buy time for the others who will fix the barrier."
Silence. Not from doubt, but from knowing what that meant.
Drail looked up. "You'll need someone to cover you."
"I know."
A pause. Rane turned his head slightly, eyes landing on Khaos.
"You're with me."
The words hung in the air, and this time, no one stayed silent.
Brevin frowned. "Him? Of all of us?"
Drail's brow furrowed. "But he's"
Rane's tone cut sharper now. "Are you questioning my judgment?"
"No, Ser," Drail said quickly. "Just surprised."
"I don't need agreement. I need action."
He stood slowly, slick with rain, his cloak heavy across his back. The others followed, rising one by one. Khaos met Brevin's eyes for a moment whatever lingered in the older knight's gaze wasn't quite trust, but it wasn't hate either. Just worry. Tired worry.
Rane drew his sword but kept it low. "Drail. Brevin. Keep wide. Make noise. Lead them east and away from the breach. Don't linger."
Brevin nodded. "We'll move when you do."
The knight's boots shifted in the mud. The clearing was close now, too close for second thoughts.
Rane turned to Khaos, speaking quietly. "You follow me. Stay low, stay sharp. You don't speak unless you have to."
Khaos nodded. "I understand."
Khaos didn't answer. He just breathed, once, deep and quiet and readied himself.
Rane gave a single signal.
Brevin burst from the thicket first, shouting at the top of his lungs, blade drawn and gleaming with rain. "Over here, you twisted freaks!"
Drail followed, slower but louder, crashing his axe against a shield of splintered wood, sending echoes down the ridge. "Come on! You want blood? Come get it!"
The Xylens turned.
One by one, heads snapped in unnatural jerks toward the noise. Spines flared, claws dragging through the mud. They hissed—not with malice or fear, but something primal and without thought.
Then they charged.
Rain exploded beneath their feet as they lunged after the fleeing knights, limbs flailing, jaws unhinged.
From the shadows near the breach, Rane and Khaos crouched behind a rotting log, watching the monsters thunder past.
Rane's breath fogged faintly in the wet air. His eyes followed the last of the Xylens until it vanished into the trees, chasing the distraction like a dog chasing motion. The forest shook with the weight of pursuit—crashing branches, snarls, splintered wood and steel ringing somewhere deeper in the dark.
"Now," Rane whispered. "Move."
They rose together and sprinted.
The clearing where the breach pulsed now lay open, free of movement. The shimmering wound in the Barrier was close closer than Khaos had ever seen it. It pulsed like a wound torn through the fabric of air itself, shedding threads of dying light.
But Khaos's thoughts were elsewhere.
As they ran, he looked back once toward the forest where Brevin and Drail had vanished. The sounds of struggle still echoed steel clashing, rough grunts, snarls that tore through the storm.
Brevin and Drail
They ducked under a twisted root and slid down a slope, Xylens shrieking behind them.
"Go left!" Drail roared.
Brevin didn't argue. They broke off the main path, weaving through gnarled brush, slipping on wet stone and moss. One Xylen lunged too close Brevin turned mid-run, slashing once across its snout. Black blood hissed into the rain, and the beast shrieked, stumbling, but not falling.
"They're not letting up!" Brevin growled.
"Good!" Drail shouted back. "That means Rane's got a chance!"
Another Xylen slammed through the trees beside them, blind in its charge. Drail spun, swung low, and drove his axe into its knee. The thing collapsed, writhing, clawing at the air but more were still coming.
"They're not stopping, are they?" Brevin asked between breaths, voice strained.
"No," Drail said grimly. "So we don't stop either."
They kept moving, breath burning in their lungs, chased by shadows that never tired.
Back at the breach…
Rane slowed as they reached the edge of the wound. The artifact was there half-buried in the mud like a rusted heart, pulsing faintly.
"Stay sharp," he muttered.
Khaos nodded, eyes scanning the edges of the tree line.
Behind them, the forest screamed.
And before them the source of it all waited.
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Chapter [Next] – Silent Warnings (cont.)
Rain poured like a curtain over the forest, thick and cold. The breach pulsed faintly ahead, an open wound where the Barrier flickered—weak, broken, vulnerable.
Rane knelt in front of the half-buried artifact, brushing mud from its etched surface. Dark metal gleamed faintly beneath his fingers, pulsing with a dim, unnatural rhythm.
Khaos stood behind him, sword drawn, eyes scanning the trees. The sounds of Drail and Brevin's desperate fight echoed from beyond the ridge—crashes, howls, metal on bone. The distraction held—for now.
Rane's fingers traced the runes on the artifact with quiet certainty.
"You recognize it," Khaos said, voice low, guarded.
Rane didn't look up. "Of course I do."
"…What is it?"
The Wrifle.
It looked like a shard torn from something older black metal lined with faint, humming runes. It didn't belong here. It didn't belong anywhere.
Rane wiped the grime away slowly, reverently. He didn't look confused by it. He knew what it was. That much was obvious now.
Khaos stepped closer. "Is that what's breaking the Barrier?"
Rane didn't answer directly. His voice was calm. Almost gentle. "It's what's holding it open."
He stood, motioning Khaos forward.
"I need you to help me pull it free," he said.
"We must touch it. At the same time. You and I," Rane said, voice measured, like he was reading from a script he already memorized. "That's how it works".
Something was wrong. Khaos could feel it. But the others were still out there, buying them time with blood and steel. He stepped forward.
They knelt together before the Wrifle, rain soaking their backs, the crackle of unstable magic thick in the air.
"Place your hand here," Rane said, indicating a glowing rune.
Khaos did.
The metal was freezing. His breath caught as the Wrifle pulsed beneath his palm. It was too late to pull away.
Rane placed his hand beside Khaos's. "On three," he said. "One… two…"
But he let go early.
Khaos's eyes flared. "Rane ?"
The world tore open.
The Wrifle flared white-hot, burning like a star. Khaos screamed as agony lit every inch of his body veins turning purple, skin blistering, his soul shredding inside his bones. His scream was not human. It echoed like something ancient being cracked in half.
He turned his head, trembling, and through the haze of pain, he saw Rane standing above him. Watching.
Smiling.
"You…" Khaos gasped, voice mangled. "Why…"
Rane's voice was like ice. "For Shion."
And then came the light.
A blinding explosion of violet and silver ripped through the breach. The Barrier roared back to life with a sound like a thousand swords being drawn.
In the distance, a Xylen lunged toward Brevin jaws wide, claws raised.
Then it burned.
It didn't scream. It couldn't. Its body erupted in blue flames and disintegrated mid-leap.
One by one, every Xylen within the Barrier caught fire and died in silence.
Drail and Brevin stared in shock as the world went still again.
Rane stepped into the clearing, holding the artifact in his hands, now cool and dull.
"Khaos?" Brevin asked, his voice raw.
Drail stepped forward, eyes scanning. "Where is he?"
Rane didn't flinch.
"Where he belongs," he said, without a shred of remorse.
"…In hell."