Volume 1 is done. Not the best volume. Its even below average.
I could find out so many faults in it. Stuff like repetitions, bad executions, different writing style e very chapter, Chapter didn't connect with previous written chapters very well, and all that.
The first chapters were boring, confusing and a bad start, yes. But truthfully I didn't expect much interaction for the novel. Even if I wished for more. This fanfic was more like my writing test and if I could find it in myself to write 2k words everyday. You know, make a habit and all that.
I can't say I have made a habit of writing everyday but its much easier to write 2k words a day. At the very least, I won't write chapters half an hour earlier than the release time. Almost half if not more chapters of Volume 1, I wrote like a hour or half an hour ago. Stupid of me, no doubt. But I was busy with life and all that.
As for my plan to rewrite the novel/ fanfic. I will do it very later on. Around 3 or 4th volume, that is if I am up for it that later on. Right now, I am searching for a good balance between show and tell writing style.
I had told a lot without showing anything in the early chapters. Then I showed a lot without telling in the Cathedral part. And it sounded much better in my head then what the people liked.
And Volume 1 is so full of original concept that using it for a fanfic just doesn't sit right with me. Sure it had a bad execution and all that. But this is too original to be called a fanfic that I had to sneak in some characters from the anime to satiate my heart. So for the draft story I am not adding more original concept.
I will leave it for the official story. That is for later. Right now I would write the story just to improve my writing skills and not write the big spoilers part in this story. I will leave it for the official story.
And for Volume 2, I have planned to show the system go online and other factors. And I believe I have achieved a good balance on the show and tell part at least for now.
So, if you are reading this part, Skip the story to Volume 2 Chapter 1.
And if you have issues and suggestions, do remember to comment. I will do my best to respond to it.