"The second hook of the connected Star Patterns is too hasty, too narrow. At the fourth connection, the turn is too sharp, which will affect the speed of the Star Power output and thus its potency.
Overall, your second-tier Star Shield is not bad; it's already a middle-grade Emblem, approaching top-grade. With a bit more effort, you'll be able to reach the quality of a top-grade second-tier Emblem.
Not bad, continue."
The disciple receiving the critique was a core disciple from the Academic Hall under Academician Kou, named Wen Lie, with the Cultivation Level of the Fourth Tier Star Condensing Realm, and had been studying Emblems under Academician Kou for over half a year.
After the critique, Academician Kou casually threw out a third-tier Emblem, flying towards Wen Lie, "The first one completed gets a reward— one top-grade third-tier Emblem that I've personally engraved."
Below, Ji Hongli's cheeks were puffed up with anger.
