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Chapter 204 - Karachi Nights & Eid Delights

 **Scene 1: Slow Morning** 

*(Najma Residence – 11:30 AM)* 

Sunlight streamed through the lace curtains as Amina's tiny fingers poked Maryam's cheek. 

**Amina:** *"Ummi… *garma garam* paratha?"* 

Maryam groaned, squinting at her phone. *"Subhan'Allah… it's almost Zuhr time!"* 

Downstairs, chaos reigned. Khadija and Hamza were building a fort with couch cushions while Irfan and Imran snored in sync on adjacent armchairs. 

**Ayesha (yawning, entering kitchen):** *"Ammi, you let us sleep through *Fajr*?"* 

**Mrs. Najma (flipping parathas):** *"After your journey? You needed it. Now eat—we're storming Karachi tonight!"* 

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 **Scene 2: The Great Eid Plan** 

*(Dining Table – 2:00 PM)* 

Khadija bounced in her seat. *"Can we go to *Sea View*? And *Boat Basin*? And—"* 

**Imran (laughing):** *"Slow down, tornado. First groceries, then clothes."* 

**Irfan (checking list):** *"We need sacrificial vouchers from *Taj Company*, mehndi cones from *Saddar*…"* 

**Maryam (whispering to Ayesha):** *"How many shops is that?"* 

**Ayesha (grinning):** *"In Karachi? *Minimum* fifteen."* 

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 **Scene 3: Sunset at Sea View** 

*(Sea View Beach – 6:30 PM)* 

Amina squealed as waves licked her toes. *"*Pani*! *Bara pani*!"* 

**Hamza (charging toward water):** *"I'm a *SHARK*!"* 

**Imran (sprinting after him):** *"Not in your *good shalwar*, you're not!"* 

Nearby, Maryam gasped at the cotton-candy sunset. *"It's… pinker than Toronto's."* 

**Irfan (smiling):** *"Wait till you see the bangles at *Zainab Market*—they'll put Canada's rainbows to shame."* 

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 **Scene 4: Grocery Wars** 

*(Hyperstar – 8:00 PM)* 

Ayesha and Mrs. Najma debated violently over rice brands. 

**Mrs. Najma:** *"*Sela* rice for *biryani*! *Basmati* turns to *glue*!"* 

**Ayesha:** *"Ammi, we're making *pulao* too—the grains need to *separate*!"* 

Meanwhile, Hamza attempted to ride the shopping cart like a chariot until an employee gave *The Look*. 

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 **Scene 5: The Bangles Brigade** 

*(Zainab Market – 10:00 PM)* 

Khadija's eyes widened at the glittering stalls. *"It's like *Aladdin*'s cave!"* 

Maryam gasped as a shopkeeper draped fifty bangles up her arm. *"They're *singing*!"* 

**Shopkeeper (smirking):** *"Special *chooriyan* for *gori mem*. Only Rs 3,000!"* 

**Ayesha (snorting):** *"*Arrey bhai*, for *plastic*? Rs 1,200!"* 

Thirty minutes of heated bargaining later, they left with seven sets—and free mehndi cones. 

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 **Scene 6: Midnight Makeup Hunt** 

*(Tariq Road – 12:30 AM)* 

**Maryam (panicking):** *"The *matching* lipstick for this *lehenga* doesn't *exist*!"* 

**Salesgirl (deadpan):** *"Aunty, it's 1 AM. Take *Fuchsia Fantasy* and *go*."* 

Irfan and Imran sat slumped outside, nursing sugarcane juices. 

**Imran:** *"Remind me why we didn't just *order online*?"* 

**Irfan (pointing to laughing wives):** *"Because *this* is Eid prep."* 

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 **Scene 7: The Last Stop** 

*(Burns Road – 1:45 AM)* 

Khadija and Hamza slept like starfish in the backseat as the adults devoured *bun kebabs*. 

**Mrs. Najma (licking chutney):** *"*Sunnat-e-Ibrahim* starts with full stomachs!"* 

**Maryam (mouth full):** *"This is… *better* than Tim Hortons."* 

Ayesha nearly choked laughing. *"Blasphemy!"* 

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 **Scene 8: Homecoming** 

*(Najma Residence – 2:30 AM)* 

Bags tumbled onto the floor in a symphony of rustling tissue paper. 

**Ammi (kissing sleeping Amina):** *"Tomorrow—*Qurbani* shopping!"* 

**Maryam (groaning):** *"More… *shopping*?"* 

**Irfan (grinning):** *"Welcome to Pakistani Eid, *habibti*."* 

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*(To be continued…)*

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